“Nothing makes a room feel emptier than wanting someone in it.”
― J
Darling lover,
It’s raining like crazy,
I am cold and feel ghastly;
To be lonely on such a day,
When all blues have turned grey.
Sitting by the patio;
I glance through shadow
Of the raindrops, playing at with me,
Beyond the marquee.
I gaze at my piano, it reflects the red,
Of the satins furrowed on the bed;
My desires turn sinful,
Abruptly; with an irresistible pull.
My thoughts racing towards you,
Coz, it’s you, I always look to.
It’s raining like crazy;
Let’s curl up being sluggish and lazy.
Share your thoughts with me at dipanwiita@gmail.com
The rain inspired poetry is superb and the leaves look ravishing with the droplets on them.
amazing…hope he runs and comes back to enjoy the rain together…superbly written 🙂
lovely lines as usual Dipanwita 🙂 am missing the Mumbai rains…. and err… much more 😉
Wow Dipanwita .. Simply beautiful ..loved he spontaneity and the flow. Can't help noticing that the rain soaked leaves are not green but red – symbolising passion . 🙂 Glad I visited 🙂
Wow Dipanwita .. Simply beautiful ..loved he spontaneity and the flow. Can't help noticing that the rain soaked leaves are not green but red – symbolising passion . 🙂 Glad I visited 🙂
Beautiful lines…Poet in the making.. 🙂
Thank you Somali 🙂
Thank you babes 🙂
Hahahaa…Yes Archana. Mumbai rains are a bliss. You can hate it and love in equally. 🙂
Thank you Kokila. You noticed it very well. That was exactly the motive of putting that picture up. 🙂
Thank you. Glad you liked it 🙂
Very gud one !!
Dipanwita! So beautiful! It's raining poetry!